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No contest at all on this one! Your ending leaves much more anticpation of what's to come and doesn't drag it out in unnecessary details
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I didn't vote due to the lack of a "Happy Ending" option. I remember now.
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Based on your story line, your ending fits better as it is written. In order to apply the ending by Mr. A, some of the story line would need to be changed.
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I'd have to hear you recite the story to choose an ending and feel SURE, Rayne...or maybe, plant a seed for yet another ending... Barring that...yours. Doc_Sonar I advocate Simplicity, Patience & Compassion...to the extent that doing so won't threaten or harm My boundaries or Me. ~ Doc_Sonar Breathe Deeply~ Peace
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